Junior

September 2010

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Sep 14 - lutzr(42)

[Paul Hughes]

Junior
by Russell Lutz

Quince has always wanted a pet. With Junior, he gets more than he bargained for.


http://www.silverthought.com/lutz07.html

[Paul Hughes]

Ladies and gentlemen, this is exactly how to get a publishing contract from ST.  Take note.

[Peafant]

Russell,  That was a lot of fun.......It also would have been neat to have one of the chapters showing what Junior was feeling.  I loved the images toward the ending, with Junior lazily swimming --sort of a Godzilla goes Lochness !   I also loved the description of Junior's wrinkly nose--you could almost feel the snot    thanks for a very entertaining read....   --Rob Crandall

[lutzr]

It also would have been neat to have one of the chapters showing what Junior was feeling. 

Interesting point.  I considered it.  I decided against a POV look into Junior's head for two reasons.  One, I wanted to underscore the fact that he wasn't sentient.  And two, I wanted to keep it somewhat of a mystery what his eventual goal was.  (I probably telegraphed that, anyway, but I tried.)