I've read the first few paragraphs to this story - (I will have to read more later and finish it; I see it's long) - but I just wanted to say that so far it is a Great Story (from the beginning paragraphs I have read) - and also the Artwork Attachment I think is SUPERB!!! Great idea.
-Cheers
Lawrence

Loved the Doctor Who Exhibit pics on your site, the ones from the new series. That was in Brighton, right? Not the Museum of the Moving Image - (I think that's what it is called) - where they have all the "old" WHO monsters retired for peole to see.